St Mary's Catholic Primary School – Story Hiding

Hiding our stories across the world, waiting for the world to read them and comment on them…


Starting the story-hiding journey

If you’re reading this for the first time, then welcome. Welcome to this blog that has been set up by the children and adults of Year 5 and 6 at St. Mary’s Catholic Primary School in Bognor Regis. We’re pleased you’ve joined us here and we’re hoping that, over time, this page is going to filled with lots of comments and ideas related to our latest writing project.

In our team here, we are passionate about reading and writing, and we’ve recently been using a short film called ‘RUIN’ as video inspiration for our literary creations. You can watch that film here if you’re interested.

With ‘RUIN’ as our inspiration, all the 97 children in our three Year 5_6 classes (named Regis, Hotham and Wheatland) have written a narrative based on this great short film. This has been written over the course of a week, breaking down the film into different parts and allowing the children (and maybe even the adults) to write their interpretation of the story in their own words.

The 8-minute film follows an unknown character in what looks like a post-apocalyptic, sky-scraper-filled city that is punctuated by trees growing out of buildings’ windows and vines and bushes littering the pavements and roads. Our character, unknown at this point, is alone, searching for something in a derelict building, and subsequently retrieves a mysterious device. At this point, he is detected by a ferocious gyrocopter who clearly doesn’t have lots of time for our character and proceeds to chase him through the streets. We are unsure whether the film’s protangonist is fighting for the good guys or the bad guys, but this allows for some great interpretation by our classes’ amazing writers.

So, what are we all going to do with these amazing creations that are written in class? Well, instead of just having that story written in their books at school, we have decided to give each child ONE envelope in which they place their own written and published version of the story, and their job has been to hide this somewhere in the big, wide world. This world COULD just be Bognor Regis, but some children in the past have been sneaky and have taken it (or had it taken) on planes to different countries before hiding it somewhere completely different. Anyone going on a trip to Australia soon?!

If you’re reading this, there’s a chance you’ve found one of these incredible stories, and we’re encouraging you to write some comments about whose story you’ve read (no surnames please – for obvious reasons!). Let us know what you liked about their story, what language you particularly enjoyed, and generally provide your honest and (hopefully) positive feedback!

In addition to comments about the story you’ve found, please do let us know where you found the story and, if you still have it, can you please put it back out into that great, big, wide world out there for some other lucky person to chance upon it and enjoy our creations!

Lastly, just some instructions on how to leave comments.

Happy reading!



7 responses to “Starting the story-hiding journey”

  1. Jayden Cheung Avatar
    Jayden Cheung

    Great description of writing lots of adjectives.The writing makes it very intense it’s almost as in you are in that position.Great work Ocean

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  2. Hello! Thank you for writing the story! My story was by Lexi. I really enjoyed reading the story and was amazed by the different ideas you have put into your writing. I found the story in Tesco, Shripney Road, Bognor Regis and I will re-hide it so that someone else can have the pleasure of reading your fantastic story. Well done!

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  3. Anthony Parry Avatar
    Anthony Parry

    Hello, my story was written by Sofia…..and my wife and I found it in Hotham Park.
    I was glued to my seat reading it…I’m so glad she saved the day. Goodness knows. What would have happened if she wasn’t around.
    Beautifully written and so imaginative.
    Had she not of managed, possibly I could have saved the day for her..
    I too have a story to tell….but this one is not fiction, it is a fact.
    I am a veteran! I joined the Royal Navy in 1962 as a young boy of 16.
    Not long after, I transferred to the submarine service and used to be a planesman and drive them………in those days what we did was very secret….we would be following enemy ships and submarines around to see what their capabilities were, s we could defend our country should the need arise…..I’m sure we would have spotted the gyrocopter….
    But because it was a secret……we were never there….(if you know what I mean)..😉
    Therefore, even to this day….. very few Submariners have medals….
    We’re never there, we never saw anything…..and it wasn’t us if you spotted a periscope…
    But what we have on our chests, far more important than any medals….it is a set of Golden Dolphins…
    You may just spot me on Remembrance Sunday at the Townhall Remembrance Service paying my respects….
    All of you, we’ll done and take care…
    Kind regards
    Tony (POSA RN Rtd)

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  4. A keen reader Avatar
    A keen reader

    Thank you for the story George found in a bus shelter in the Derbyshire village of Egginton. We were really impressed by your descriptive vocabulary. We’ll put it back for someone else to read 🙂

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  5. Hello! I am so happy I was able read Harriet’s story. I am a public library worker in Boston Massachusetts. This story was very captivating and I was impressed by how well written this story was. Harriet I hope you continue your journey of writing. You done an amazing Job.

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  6. Hello Leo .I found your story in the Peace Park , Patcham ,Brighton .This was ironic considering yours was a futuristic tale of mayhem and monstrous machinery .You had obviously studied your subject matter closely over some considerable time . I could imagine your stories being made into a very exciting films if you concentrate your efforts on inventions and mechanical engineering .The whole tale had great descriptive power and energy .Keep going with your stories but spend a little more time perfecting your hand writing please .
    I will place your story in another peaceful place for the next person to comment on .

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  7. Ruin by Blossom

    What a fantastic story! The writing allowed me to vividly picture the landscape and high paced chase. Well done to the writer 🙂 Left me wanting more of the story!

    I found this story in Kerry on the south west coast of Ireland, much to my surprise!
    Looking forward to where it goes next – Mary

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A warm welcome to St. Mary’s Catholic Primary School! We serve the Bognor community and a wide parish community from Pagham in the West to Middleton-on-Sea in the East and up to Barnham/Slindon on the edge of the South Downs National Park. This blog is our attempt to share the wonderful work of some of our 90+ Year 5 and 6 students (aged between nine and eleven). Look in the first blog post for details of what this blog is all about!

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